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Conversation topic suggestions? + AP Demo

Journal Entry: Fri Apr 3, 2009, 7:38 PM

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Uploaded the Demo version for those who are interested:

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Lemme know if it works. :3 (ignore the Chinese characters, they are not important, it's carried over from the game-making software and I can't translate it. ;_; )


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Taking a short break from drawings, I thought I'd work a bit more on my game with Kei. Aside from the CGs that need to be finished, one problem I'm really struggling with is the script. I have a rough outline of what's going to happen for the main events, but the everyday random conversations are what's really giving me headaches.

so maybe you guys can help? Just give me some suggestions on topics of conversation that can occur when talking with either Kei or Ayumi? Please be realistic, no silly ones because I really want to get this game finished. >.<;;

All of these are under the assumption that the protagonist does not know about Kei being His Majesty. And Ayumi is the protagonist's friend.

Prompts:

At the bar:

-Talking to His Majesty (low affection)
-Talking to His Majesty (medium affection)
-Talking to His Majesty (high affection)

In School Library:

-Talking to Kei (medium affection)
-Talking to Kei (high affection)

In University (skipping class):

-Talking to Kei (low affection)
-Talking to Kei (medium affection)
-Talking to Kei (high affection)
-Talking to Ayumi

In Mido District (where Kei lives):

-Talking to Kei (low affection)
-Talking to Kei (medium affection)
-Talking to Kei (high affection)

In Amusement park:

-Talking to Kei (low affection)
-Talking to Kei (medium affection)
-Talking to Kei (high affection)
-Talking to Ayumi

In shopping center:

-Talking to Kei (low affection)
-Talking to Kei (medium affection)
-Talking to Kei (high affection)
-Talking to Ayumi

At the Beach:

-Talking to Ayumi


No need for actual conversations, I just need suggestions on what topic they should be talking about. Hopefully I can get inspired from your comments? Either way, I'd really appreciate it! >w<;;;


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~Nitidus Apr 3, 2009, 3:35:15 PM
*tries to think of what I talk about...*

hmm well food's a fun topic
things you look forward to
dreams
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~Shihouka Apr 3, 2009, 3:45:46 PM
I'd love to help, but...I'm not sure how to go about this since I don't know Kei and Ayumi very much. orz

Um, just...let it flow naturally, Tooaya. Don't kill yourself too much trying to figure out how the conversation should go between the protagonist, Kei, and Ayumi. If you think too hard on it, it'll be close to impossible to make the script the way you want it and the conversation will seem forced. So, just relax, and let the characters do the talking for you...if that makes any sense. x_x

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~moonlight-fox Apr 3, 2009, 3:49:18 PM
Library...favorite book?

Beach..ice cream?

Amusement park...how nice the weather is?

Shopping center.....fashion sense....?

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~landOftheLaLa Apr 3, 2009, 3:49:58 PM
next time you have a conversation with someone pay attention to what your talking about, use that as your inspirations

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~blue-angel-forever Apr 3, 2009, 3:53:53 PM
I don't know Kei or Ayumi, but when I talk with my friends, it usually begins like:

"Hey"
"Hey"
"What's up?"
"Nothing much."

All I can think of is this format:

[Greeting]
["What's up" or "How's the weather going?" Type statement]
or
[Insert Random Topic Here]
or
[Insert Joke]
or
[Insert Question]

And follow through.

One scenario for the library could be him/her asking why they are there and following through with a joke by the respondent or something... >>

That's all I got.

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=tooaya Apr 3, 2009, 3:59:45 PM
lol for me, the conversation ends right there after those 4 lines. *horrid at talking to people*

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~onecoolc Apr 3, 2009, 4:00:14 PM
I would love to see some one teasing the main character during a conversation about gaming, and saying something along the lines of "WHAT?! You play H-Games?!" Even though they totally don't. xD It would crack me up to high heaven and back.

Hmm. >.< But on a more serious note, I don't know the characters well enough to tell what would appeal to them. I mean, His Majesty is obviously obsessed with the opposite gender, but beyond that? ^^; Hrrrrm. Keeping in character is really important, especially during the "High Affection" stages. So sit down and have a good talk with them! XD Act like a skitzo.

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=tooaya Apr 3, 2009, 4:00:43 PM
I haven't talked to people since god knows when. And all conversations on the internet are too silly to be realistic. -.-;;

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=tooaya Apr 3, 2009, 4:01:10 PM
good ideas! thank you~<3

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~blue-angel-forever Apr 3, 2009, 4:02:07 PM
Ah... same... ._.
All I know is that when in an awkward situation like that, say something random.
For instance: "Awkward Turtle~"

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